This is a strong trailer Jack. You have demonstrated proficiency in terms of shooting material appropriate for task; including controlled use of camera, attention to framing and close attention to mise-en-scene. The location that you have chosen is ideal for the genre and the range of shot types are good. On top of this the script, costume and props are also good. The editing shows levels of proficiency with a build up of tension through the use of a range of transitions. Your use of text is good, although it is probably not as clear as it could be. In addition to this the sound that you have used is perfect for the genre and for a trailer of this kind. Overall, very good, well domes Jack.
This is a strong trailer Jack. You have demonstrated proficiency in terms of shooting material appropriate for task; including controlled use of camera, attention to framing and close attention to mise-en-scene. The location that you have chosen is ideal for the genre and the range of shot types are good. On top of this the script, costume and props are also good. The editing shows levels of proficiency with a build up of tension through the use of a range of transitions. Your use of text is good, although it is probably not as clear as it could be. In addition to this the sound that you have used is perfect for the genre and for a trailer of this kind. Overall, very good, well domes Jack.
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